The mind, body and soul

This is a poem I wrote for charity
I didn't work at it at all
It took my less than 10 minutes to write - so this is just a rough draft
It needs a lot of work

For there was once a body who had no soul

And a mind who had no body

There story goes like this

It was quiet complicated with lots of twists

Body:

I am weak

I decay

For I have no reason to exist

My body does not move

Vessel of nothingness

If only I had a soul some life to breath with me

I might just be something worth living

Mind:

I sit here alone

Intelligent but disclosed

I know all

I am all

But without touch, without feeling, without something to control

I am more worthless than any human thing

Soul:

I shall strike a deal

Only once I shall say

For it is I

The life, The love, The tranquility of worlds

I bring not power For I have no body

I bring not strength of mind For I have my own free will

But I do bring hope

That is all you need

But I do bring spirit

That is all you seek

But I do bring love

That is;

If you need it

I shall go with you Body

And face life head on

For without you

I only lay

A soul rested in the ground

I shall go with you Mind

And face life logically on

For without you

I only blabber words

Without meaning

Words

Without cause

So you see

This is the story of how no one could live alone

And I hope you understand

That without a mind, body or soul

There is nothing

Nothing of greatness

Nothing of life

So count your blessings

And just be

You still have a life to live

Others;

Not so lucky

Don’t be foolish

Be wise

Don’t be ruthless

Be kind

Don’t be a snob

Be humble

Doesn’t this make you glad?

So yeah.
Tell me what you think